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We Call Them Unclean

stuffed critters line the dashboard of the V-dub he takes every day to visit her where she rests his bent fingers pluck strings serenade little princess sightless except for shadows, sees the cloudless day and beams the brightest crooked-smile gratitude feisty one drives big truck one leg to pump the pedals which one, the gas of course! while she dreams of evenings dancing bike pedals turning, churning on his daily fitness route he ventured out, not accepted came home to lead belonging rubber boots, wide-brimmed hat hands toil earth creating beauty short strong arms set nets He reaps ocean's bounty through serenity *the unmentionable word of all time – leprosy. The stigma still exists for those who have long been rid of Hansen's Disease. The only unclean thing is the heart of mankind. Dedicated to all those who have honored and touched my heart on Molokaí.

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Date: 11/9/2011 6:46:00 AM
YOU ARE SOOO ON point with this! ALL my life I have heard ppl making fun of lepers, calling them dirty Job. and Boil Makers foggy eyed frog eyes. I have researched quite a bit on a leper camp overseas and One very great documentary showed some Foster Teens from NYC visiting the Camp! 100% tear jerkingly moving! If I find the name of this film. I will pass it on. Those ppl had NOTHING, and NO family, Yet were so happy and filled with love and humility. A true Joyous and grateful view of life!
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Susan Buchel
Date: 11/9/2011 8:17:00 PM
wow. Thanks for your comments and good to know someone understands how my sweet friends' zest for life affects me and humbles me just to know them. I'd love to take a look at that video if you happen upon it. Thanks again
Date: 11/7/2011 1:21:00 AM
Susan many congrats on your win, a very moving poem, thanks for your comments..David
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Date: 9/21/2011 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 8:45:00 AM
i knew this would have a revered place in the contest, susan.. again, cheery congrats on your fine win..:) huggs!
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/18/2011 9:38:00 AM
thanks, Nette!
Date: 9/17/2011 3:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your accomplished place in the contest "unmentionables"...CR
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/17/2011 9:32:00 AM
thanks for your comment!
Date: 9/17/2011 12:30:00 AM
Tough subject but you did it well-congrats. to you
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/17/2011 9:33:00 AM
Not too hard to write about when you know these five sweet people! Each with a different gift...
Date: 9/16/2011 11:50:00 PM
Congrats Susan on a wonderful win with this fantastic poetry .. very profound piece luv..
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/17/2011 9:34:00 AM
thank you, Linda-Marie!
Date: 9/16/2011 10:22:00 PM
One of my favorite books has a leper as a christ figure the Tales of thomas Covenant..by Donaldson I think...it's good more is know of this and more can now be done to help people with this malady, so glad you found time to write this! light & love
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/17/2011 9:35:00 AM
thanks. I'll try to get a hold of that book! Sue
Date: 9/14/2011 1:36:00 PM
I just love reading poetry that shows the release of a poets feelings. I enjoyed reading yours today Susan. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/14/2011 7:58:00 PM
How do you EVER find time to give so much encouragement to so many of us? I see your comments EVERYWHERE. Bless you!
Date: 9/14/2011 3:13:00 AM
this is sucha comapssionate write, susan...a subject rarely discussed these days yet brought to the fore by your wonderful words.. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/13/2011 8:55:00 PM
touching ~N
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/13/2011 10:46:00 PM
Thanks for reading this, Nancy. By the way, I LOVE your collaboration with John.... BRILLIANT!!!!!

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