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We Are the Brightest Stars Among All Gods Creations:Answer Me

I watch the gleam of those sparkling eyes And wheeze through the freedom of the open skies Her fascination In imagination Is like a hypnotizing charm of a born magician I am wide awake over the Earth’s blanket of grass Then open my hands to spread my magic like shattering glass I embrace your desire To ignite the fire And soon I’m discovered in the lands of Myre Gather yourself up and find peace in his kingdom For God, he reigns us with his love and wisdom When bound I found The joy in his world, all around You stand there at distance in poise motionless And sigh heavily with no words to express Your agony Snging melancholy Longing to be free and get a taste of my liberty; If only we can learn to cherish the beauty within us Like finding mysterious truths in a book anonymous!

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Skat A

Date: 4/19/2016 11:41:00 PM

BIHU JOHRI, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/18/2016 12:01:00 AM

Dear Bihu, It is a great Very impressive one.Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugspoem.

Bihu Johri
Date: 4/19/2016 10:39:00 AM

Thanku so much :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/17/2016 7:34:00 AM

Bihu,,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Bihu Johri
Date: 4/19/2016 10:31:00 AM

Hi Linda...i am very excited about Poetry Soup. I would love to hear all and any type of comments given with respect to improving my skills. They are more than welcome. It would be a great learning reading your poems and follow your posts :)

Bihu Johri
Date: 4/17/2016 2:02:00 PM

Thank you so much!! :)