We Are Redundant

we finish each other's sentences
saying "we are redundant" six times a day
it's forty-nine years later and we remain
maniacally crazy about each other
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Bauer Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 12:55 PM
this made me smile in a big way, caren!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 11:28 PM
Thank you Ilene Every poem I write he reads and says "Is this me? Is this me? Is this me?" Um....sometimes yes, sometimes NO!
Hankins Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 9:11 AM
This is so fine, Caren. Just keep finishing those sentences until the last words to be spoken are spoken. Good writing.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 11:28 PM
There is no choice; we are pretty set in our way now.
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