Premiere Contest WinnerWe Are One

I've lost all perception 
                                 of where you stop
                                                            and I begin



AP: 3rd place 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 5:56 PM
Hello Lin Gauthier, congratulations on your win. A great one liner. have a nice evening my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 8:53 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Most appreciated.
Promise Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 5:35 PM
Lovely One Liner. Congratulations on your Top Win. Hugs ?? Rainbow ??
Gauthier Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Rainbow.
Haight Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 11:55 AM
Line, congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win for your powerful poem. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 9:07 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Gilmour Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 3:25 AM
This is so special Line, I adore it - a massive Fav for me! Many congrats on your top win - the only position for it! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 8:23 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, Ann.
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 9:52 PM
Wow! Congrats to you, my friend, on a #1 trophy win in Brian's contest with this poignant, perfect, unforgettable monoku! (Can I say mazeltov? Do you know what that is? If not, don't worry; it's all good. It means, literally, 'a good star!' in Hebrew and Yiddish, but it's used for both good luck and congratulations). Mazeltov! ~ gw
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 9:57 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. And Mazeltov to you as well! Your comment is a FAVE. LOL
Awtry Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 4:45 PM
Concise perfection! Congratulations!!!
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Thank you for your lovely compliment, PS.
Drowley Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 12:02 PM
'Line, Congratulations on your win. I like the steps. David:)'
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Thanks, David, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 11:06 AM
Congrats, LIne . It's a clever three-liner.
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 8:29 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Ashley Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 10:05 AM
A beautiful sentiment, Line. Congratulations on your wonderful trophy win for your lovely poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 8:29 PM
Thanks, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Dutta Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 8:53 AM
BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP.
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 8:29 PM
Thank you so much, Anisha.
Pandit Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 8:17 AM
Congrats Line--a brilliant write.
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Thanks, Vijay. Most appreciated.
Rushing Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 6:58 AM
Congratulations Line on your 1st place in Brian's contest! Have a wonderful weekend!
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Thanks, Wren. Much appreciated.
Warrior Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 6:56 AM
Nice one Line...Congrats on top honors...^WW^
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Thanks, WW. Much appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 10:06 PM
Wonderfully romantic!
Gauthier Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 10:45 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Timothy.
Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 8:55 PM
Stop and start; start and stop; getting dizzy; endless circle. Great monoku, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 9:03 PM
Thanks, Gershon, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Just lovely. x
Gauthier Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 8:40 AM
Thank you, Maureen. Much appreciated.
Michael Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 4:45 AM
A nice place for 2 to be... ONE
Gauthier Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 6:21 AM
Indeed. Thanks, Arturo.
Roper Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 8:00 PM
nicely done
Gauthier Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 8:17 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
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