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We are till one day we are not
the sudden change you brought
not a reason not a single thought
it is easy to let things fall apart
the lost mind writing from heart
the truth that I have been taught
in a cruel way so as not to forget
a perfect shot that is on target
the hunted without movement
mind in torment from lessons learnt 
straight truth time to face the fact

Some of us can easily get hurt
a weakness a very bad trait
a strength that differs us from the rest
as we care for those we love most
always cherishing all that we lost
for granted the important that exist
without thinking we blame fate
easy answer for ones own fault

Do we know what this all costs
do we look back in the past
do we our dear mistakes regret
do we care about the rest
do we take the risks
do we mend the mistakes
do we do whatever it takes
do we care what he/she thinks
do we keep the promise
do we make that choice
do we react without force

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/26/2015 1:08:00 PM
Justin, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/24/2015 2:34:00 PM
Hi Justin, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/24/2015 2:24:00 PM
Hey Justin, a hearty and very warm welcome to Poetry Soup! This piece causes deep introspection to arise in the reader. I like your imagery in this also. Well done and I am looking forward to more great poems from you. There are so many great poets here and it is a place to grow in this wonderful art form. Be Blessed, Neva
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