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We are till one day we are not the sudden change you brought not a reason not a single thought it is easy to let things fall apart the lost mind writing from heart the truth that I have been taught in a cruel way so as not to forget a perfect shot that is on target the hunted without movement mind in torment from lessons learnt straight truth time to face the fact Some of us can easily get hurt a weakness a very bad trait a strength that differs us from the rest as we care for those we love most always cherishing all that we lost for granted the important that exist without thinking we blame fate easy answer for ones own fault Do we know what this all costs do we look back in the past do we our dear mistakes regret do we care about the rest do we take the risks do we mend the mistakes do we do whatever it takes do we care what he/she thinks do we keep the promise do we make that choice do we react without force

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Date: 8/26/2015 1:08:00 PM
Justin, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/24/2015 2:34:00 PM
Hi Justin, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/24/2015 2:24:00 PM
Hey Justin, a hearty and very warm welcome to Poetry Soup! This piece causes deep introspection to arise in the reader. I like your imagery in this also. Well done and I am looking forward to more great poems from you. There are so many great poets here and it is a place to grow in this wonderful art form. Be Blessed, Neva
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