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Beneath the salutation of stars a million people run free most of them are in little cars, forgetting how to be above us only skies are privy to the charms of a stars glee with all those tiny gadgets, cel phones, & texts we don't see how all that information, never seems to require a "WE "

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Date: 10/29/2019 2:25:00 PM
Wonderfully, penned.... PR
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Date: 10/28/2019 2:40:00 PM
I do so love the stars and watching the constellations. Good stuff here my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/28/2019 2:08:00 PM
Love the clever twist on the last line, yes we seem to be losing the 'we' of us in electronics, well penned!
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Date: 10/27/2019 1:44:00 PM
So true.....
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Date: 10/28/2019 11:31:00 AM
I rather talk to people one on one. then texting
Date: 10/27/2019 8:33:00 AM
Brilliant poetry, Pixie..so well written!
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Date: 10/28/2019 11:32:00 AM
Dear Vij, I hope you got your vocal poem, lol,
Date: 10/27/2019 7:43:00 AM
Delightful poem, Pixie.
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Date: 10/28/2019 11:32:00 AM
Thank you Line, glad you enjoyed it, be well xo

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