Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

We

Beneath the salutation of stars a million people run free 
most of them are in little cars, forgetting how to be 
above us only skies are privy to the charms of a stars glee 
with all those tiny gadgets, cel phones, & texts we don't see  
how all that information,  never seems to require a "WE  "

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Panagiota Romios October 29, 2019 at 2:25 PM Wonderfully, penned.... PR

Judy Ball October 28, 2019 at 2:40 PM I do so love the stars and watching the constellations. Good stuff here my friend. God Bless, JB

Michelle Faulkner October 28, 2019 at 2:08 PM Love the clever twist on the last line, yes we seem to be losing the 'we' of us in electronics, well penned!

Silent One October 27, 2019 at 1:44 PM So true..... Mystic Rose Rose October 28, 2019 at 11:31 AM I rather talk to people one on one. then texting

Vijay Pandit October 27, 2019 at 8:33 AM Brilliant poetry, Pixie..so well written! Mystic Rose Rose October 28, 2019 at 11:32 AM Dear Vij, I hope you got your vocal poem, lol,

Line Gauthier October 27, 2019 at 7:43 AM Delightful poem, Pixie. Mystic Rose Rose October 28, 2019 at 11:32 AM Thank you Line, glad you enjoyed it, be well xo