Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Wayward Wings 8x8

Floating on a repentant leaf.
Circling in flotsam fairy pond.
Drizzling leaves whirligig in dark.
Wayward wings beg woods to respond.
Tiny tears flooding maple boat.
The sentinel owl nods his head
as hearts resound with golden wings
whisking away prodigal’s dread.

8x8 Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  PS Awtry
Date:  11/10/2018

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P.S. Awtry November 14, 2018 at 10:42 PM there is a magic in these words :) Kim Rodrigues November 14, 2018 at 10:58 PM Thank you, P.S.!

Michelle Faulkner November 12, 2018 at 4:39 PM Yes I think any species can grieve, so original and beautifully sad... Kim Rodrigues November 12, 2018 at 4:43 PM Thank you, Michelle!

Gershon Wolf November 11, 2018 at 10:10 PM Ooh! This is a gem. Such intriguing imagery and so many unusual turns of phrases packed tight here. Nicely done, Kim. G.L. in the contest! ~ Gershon Kim Rodrigues November 12, 2018 at 1:44 PM Thanks so much, Gershon!

Sara Kendrick November 11, 2018 at 6:26 AM Interesting work. Reads like a good contender. Sara Kim Rodrigues November 11, 2018 at 6:32 AM Thanks, Sara!

Caren Krutsinger November 10, 2018 at 9:16 PM What you can do with just a few well-chosen words is gob-smackingly satisfying and amazing. You have a gift that just keeps giving, and I am so glad you are sharing it with me! Each line so filled with imagery, and natural goodness, Kim. Sweet! Kim Rodrigues November 11, 2018 at 5:42 AM Thanks so much, Caren! :) Good Sonday Morning!