Wayra Lantern

Thunderstorm-wrenched night
hit dark rains on window pane,
stuck alone in blackout room,
heard knock on creaking door,
sense shook in shade of leaked lantern.


May 21, 2020
Syllable count : 5/7/7/6/8
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Theme chosen : Lantern
Contest : Weaving A Wayra
Sponsor : Nette Onclaud
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Mishra Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 6:04 PM
The mystery flows throughout the poem and takes a thrilling turn in the end. Congratulations on your win Subimal! :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 5:40 AM
amazing!...suspense gripped me, subimal...congrats on your well-deserved win in my contest!...huggs
Mcintosh Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 7:43 PM
Wonderful entry and I wish you the best in the contest. Many blessings and much love sent your way!!! Gina
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