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Wayra Lantern

With my lamp my left And my brown haired dog my right Something dark lurks in the woods Who is there I call out? We dashed out, smeared with blood a babe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/21/2020 1:48:00 AM
This one took an unexpectedly scary turn. All the best Gideon :)
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Date: 5/20/2020 3:09:00 PM
A chilling ending was unexpected Gideon. Very good! Blessings xxoo
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/20/2020 3:27:00 PM
Thanks For the comments
Date: 5/20/2020 8:23:00 AM
The last line was definitely a turn of the poem--apt for the contest theme.
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/20/2020 8:46:00 AM
Thanks P.

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