Wayra Lantern

With my lamp my left And my brown haired dog my right Something dark lurks in the woods Who is there I call out? We dashed out, smeared with blood a babe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 1:48 AM
This one took an unexpectedly scary turn. All the best Gideon :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 3:09 PM
A chilling ending was unexpected Gideon. Very good! Blessings xxoo
Idudje Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 3:27 PM
Thanks For the comments
Pandit Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 8:23 AM
The last line was definitely a turn of the poem--apt for the contest theme.
Idudje Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 8:46 AM
Thanks P.
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