Waylay of the Night

Illustrated haze,
Dappled on the blue canvas;
Vanquished by the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 10:59 AM
Where do you find them all Raul, its like reading a production line of class, Wow, James
Mason Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 3:59 PM
Just beautiful here, Raul ... very clever to tie the title to the twilight dappling ... smile ... love it!! You've certainly been busy lately with this form ... I can't keep up ... LOL ... glad you're here at the Soup. If you give me your birth day/month, I'll add you to my "singing" blog calendar ... if you want ...
Winter Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 8:35 AM
Raul, you're on a brilliant roll, unending. Lucky for us. Love, Shar
Shango Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 8:19 AM
Speechless ... highest regards always to my genius brother and friend.
Strand Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 7:32 AM
Spellbounding poetry Raul>rgds Brian
Higgins Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 4:33 AM
Love the title..love the haiku..love the talent..brilliant.
Goff Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 4:13 AM
mmmm!!!!! Raul! just hypnotically mesmerizing!!! really delicious!!!!! Jim
Chircop Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 2:26 AM
you are a master of Haiku,so true,i wish i could do it---wonderful,i love your style---charma
Leccese Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 1:50 AM
The "King" has done it again! God I love reading your Haiku's. Great work! Nate
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