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Waylay of the Night

Illustrated haze, Dappled on the blue canvas; Vanquished by the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/24/2009 10:59:00 AM
Where do you find them all Raul, its like reading a production line of class, Wow, James
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Date: 5/23/2009 3:59:00 PM
Just beautiful here, Raul ... very clever to tie the title to the twilight dappling ... smile ... love it!! You've certainly been busy lately with this form ... I can't keep up ... LOL ... glad you're here at the Soup. If you give me your birth day/month, I'll add you to my "singing" blog calendar ... if you want ...
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Date: 5/21/2009 8:35:00 AM
Raul, you're on a brilliant roll, unending. Lucky for us. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/21/2009 8:19:00 AM
Speechless ... highest regards always to my genius brother and friend.
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Date: 5/21/2009 7:32:00 AM
Spellbounding poetry Raul>rgds Brian
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Date: 5/21/2009 4:33:00 AM
Love the title..love the haiku..love the talent..brilliant.
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Date: 5/21/2009 4:13:00 AM
mmmm!!!!! Raul! just hypnotically mesmerizing!!! really delicious!!!!! Jim
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Date: 5/21/2009 2:26:00 AM
you are a master of Haiku,so true,i wish i could do it---wonderful,i love your style---charma
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Date: 5/21/2009 1:50:00 AM
The "King" has done it again! God I love reading your Haiku's. Great work! Nate
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