Way Too Much Power

Way 
too 
much 
power 
stacked 
up 
on 
the 
shelf,
Almost 
as 
much 
power 
as 
the 
Lord 
God 
himself,
No 
room 
for 
human 
error 
no 
room 
for 
mistake,
With 
a 
long 
list 
of 
families 
and 
hearts 
they 
did 
break,
Whose 
was 
the 
decision?
Who 
deemed 
it 
correct?
It's 
a 
fine 
line 
between 
nurture 
and 
neglect,
Misinterpretation 
is 
just 
no 
excuse,
Is 
it 
child 
protection 
or 
maybe 
child 
abuse?
As 
you 
gather 
the 
details 
each 
in 
its 
right 
place,
Have 
you 
got 
all 
the 
facts 
right 
to 
build 
up 
ya 
case?
Was 
it 
mere 
chastizing 
or 
harsh 
push  
'n' 
shove?
As 
you 
remove 
these 
kids 
from 
the 
families 
they 
love,
And 
the 
homes 
that  
get 
broken 
are 
tossed 
on 
the 
pile,
As  
the 
kid 
with 
no 
mummy 
forgets 
how 
to 
smile,
As 
the 
powers 
that 
be 
sit 
deciding 
your 
fate,
There  
are 
no 
words 
of 
wisdom 
that 
can 
compensate,
So 
where 
lies 
the 
answer 
to 
whom 
love 
deprives?
Given 
way 
too 
much 
power 
to 
play 
God 
with 
kids 
lives.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/19/2013 1:36:00 PM
Julie,, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda
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Date: 5/9/2013 9:32:00 PM
Julie, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/9/2013 11:51:00 AM
Congrats on your deserving winning piece.
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:14:00 AM
Great to see this in the winners list JJ. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/7/2013 9:28:00 PM
Congratulations JULIE:-) thanks for taking your time entering my contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
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Date: 5/5/2013 11:25:00 AM
WOW JJ. This is my kind of poetry. Great entrance into the soup, welcome and I hope to see more of your work. Take care, Richard
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Date: 5/5/2013 8:15:00 AM
Julie, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; If you like, please consider checking out my newest contest for fun : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems as of now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on certain poems, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 5/11/2013 6:04:00 AM
just posted something n in process of posting a few more,...you asked me to let u know :)
Date: 5/5/2013 6:24:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Julie. - A enjoyable poem to read from you, thanks. - I hope there will be many fine poems from you in the future. - You have a natural talent .... let thoughts and words .... fly!! - welcome to read + comment some of mine if you want. - Have a nice Sunday. - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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