Way To Being Alone

Way to being alone		
		
 I am on my way to being alone		
I am on my way to be my own		
I am on my way to my dreams		
I had seen someday with you		
				
I gave you my dreams		
I gave you my heart			
I gave you my blood			
But it never seemed enough		
				
You were never content with what you got
Or I never learnt to satisfy		
I kept pumping you and you kept flying high
I kept waiting for you and you never heard my cries
				
It may be your way, I am not gonna blame
I trusted you and brought me shame	
Now I can’t wait for you anymore	
My dreams still have wings though my body  is sore
				
Baby you hurt me beyond limits	
Though it’s tough I am gonna keep walking
I am on my way to being alone		
I am on my way to be my own

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Date: 12/15/2017 7:55:00 AM
Your words show that you tried your very best, Anand, so it appears to me that you could not fault yourself. Going separate ways could well be the right solution. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/4/2017 12:05:00 AM
You get better and better every time you post a new poem! This one is filled with emotions and substance. Great job!
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Anand Parmale
Date: 6/4/2017 8:04:00 AM
Thanks dear Hansi
Date: 6/3/2017 7:43:00 PM
anand, I can imagine this one as a song with that cool refrain that begins and ends this poem. I like how you said you still have wings though body is sore. Lovely.
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Anand Parmale
Date: 6/3/2017 8:23:00 PM
Thank you dear Andrea
Date: 5/30/2017 12:33:00 PM
- It's sad, but sometimes it's best for both - A great and touching poem, Anand - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/30/2017 1:05:00 PM
Thanks dear Annelise
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