Way Back When I Was Ten Years Old

Way Back When I Was Ten Years Old
Sponsor: Kelly Deschler


I'm laying here remembering way back when I was ten years old,
     my mumma taught me to cook, even though the food was always cold.

My body had been changing and I was becoming a young lady,
     my mumma read me a book in which I remember only vaguely.

One night I had seen a segment on the tv news station,
     my mumma explained there are so many poor people in the nation.

In fourth grade I wanted to fit in and buy clothes from Abercrombie,
     my mumma sternly explained how money does not grow on trees.

In the school hallway I had been bullied by mean girls twice,
     my mumma explained that other kids won't always be nice.

There was an incident in which a group of boys were expelled,
     my mumma explained to me drugs are harmful and I must excel.

Wow, while I am writing this it is bringing back learned lessons,
     my mumma taught me how to turn growing pains into blessings.

Date Written: January 26, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sergi Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations, Laura: A beautiful look back in time.
Gentry Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Congratulations on your win! I enjoyed reading this. Your mom was very wise :)
Onclaud Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 8:20 AM
splendid read, lou... big congrats on your win!..huggs
Lane Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 5:52 AM
Your mumma taught you well. Very nice glimpse into your childhood, Luloo. Congratulations.
Turner Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Back to say congratulations Luloo and thank you for letting us into your treasure chest of golden memories. Bless your memories and Peace:)
Deschler Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Some nice childhood memories you've shared with us here... Congrats on a win with this great poem! Thanks for entering, Laura :)
Scars Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 9:01 PM
Thank you Kelly for my placement*smiles*-luloo
Inman Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Sweet write Laura. It's hard to see those lessons when we are young.
Scars Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 12:18 PM
thank you James :)
Turner Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:30 PM
Sounds like you paid attention to your mother. Love the couplets.A7... in my book, but thankfully I'm not the judge.
Scars Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Thank you Daniel for your kind words :) *Smiles*
Muzzey Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 4:10 PM
Your mom and my mom must have known each other Luloo, they sound alike. A very nice write for the contest. I'm still having trouble remembering that far back... Caryl
Scars Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Thank you Caryl for your kind words :) Yes it took me a few minutes to think about those years so long ago.*smiles*
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 3:51 PM
that was cool how you approached this theme and ended with a summation of how your mom taught you to turn growing pains into blessings. Awesome message, sweetie.
Scars Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Thank you very much Andrea *smiles*
Onclaud Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 12:31 PM
beautiful lessons learned at 10..such a reflective, memorable write, laura... huggs
Scars Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 1:51 PM
You're so sweet, many thanks for all your nice comments Nette! *smiles* -luloo
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