Way Back When

‘Way Back When

I often wish for days of old and things I learned from stories told
when old folks sat around the room and swept their minds with memory’s broom,
and told of ‘way back when.

The work was harder in those days.  They didn’t have our modern ways,
but still they found the time to see what friends’ and neighbors’ needs might be,
in days of ‘way back when.

Men respected womanhood, and it was always understood,
that while men were the household’s head, ‘twas womanhood that truly led
in homes of ‘way back when.

Chivalry was ’live and well.  It’s something now that we just tell
each other that it seems it died, and no one knows the reason why
it’s not like ‘way back when.

We lost a lot when those days passed, a way of life that did not last,
a time of graciousness and style (that’s now considered not worthwhile)
like days of ‘way back when.

I heard as they “remembered when” and told of how things were back then.
I wished that time could change somehow and make those old days happen now,
the days of ‘way back when.

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Date: 11/30/2016 10:55:00 PM
This is lovely
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Yvonne Uzzell
Date: 11/30/2016 11:38:00 PM
Thank you so much. 8-)
Date: 11/30/2016 7:49:00 PM
I heard as they “remembered when” and told of how things were back then. I wished that time could change somehow and make those old days happen now, the days of ‘way back when... This one reminds me of the song popularized by England Dan & John Ford Coley, .... Wish I had a time machine I could make myself go back Until the day I was born, And I would live my life again and rearrange it so that I'll be Yours from now on....... Congrats on being featured..
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Yvonne Uzzell
Date: 11/30/2016 8:18:00 PM
Thank you so much for a lovely review. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 11/30/2016 12:30:00 PM
Most elegant...Flavoured with reassuring "Old worldly charm". Lovely poem, Yvonne...Really quite lovely. My best regards! :) john P.s A seven for bringing comfort into my little room to sit with me besides my roaring fire this chilly eve. :)
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Yvonne Uzzell
Date: 11/30/2016 8:19:00 PM
I'm so happy if you found comfort in this poem. I'm very flattered. Sitting by a roaring fire sounds lovely. Not cold enough yet here. Thank you for telling me this. 8-)
Date: 11/28/2016 5:52:00 PM
As I am old, I wish and agree that those good old days would return to me. Great poem and congrats!.
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Yvonne Uzzell
Date: 11/28/2016 8:51:00 PM
I do, too, but they never will. Things are so different now. (Sigh) Thank you for your lovely words. 8-)
Date: 11/28/2016 2:42:00 PM
~Beautifully Written~
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Yvonne Uzzell
Date: 11/28/2016 8:52:00 PM
Thank you. I appreciate that. 8-)
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