Way

I'm slipping into a world I don’t know, I'm going in a way that doesn’t show, I try to weave hope into the maze, I look for a pathway through the haze. I open the door to my abode, A deluge makes an inroad, I'm in a tumultuous session, In a world beyond view and comprehension. I'm a portrait of sombre colours, My chamber is patterned with contours, I work to assemble my thoughts, They are bricks of varied sorts. Dawn chauffeurs me this way, Little do I know about it to say, Its volume is sculpted in obscurity, Its details coalesce in veiled security. April 24, 2023, Writing Challenge - 'W' Words - Poetry Contest, Constance La France.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/29/2023 1:30:00 PM

Congratulations on this winning work on the contest list. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/27/2023 9:09:00 PM

Hi Thompson, You composed a good poem using the chosen word. We chose the same word. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a good day;-) Alexis

Thompson Emate
Date: 4/27/2023 9:20:00 PM

Wow! I never knew. That's a sweet coincidence. I'm honoured. Blessings.

Constance La France

Date: 4/27/2023 12:58:00 PM

Thompson, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations !

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/26/2023 7:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the Contest Thompson This rhyming poem is so good Message i get from this poem: In the way of life , there is always winning and losing ... Just courage And hope stand

Thompson Emate
Date: 4/27/2023 8:57:00 AM

Thank you so much, Alfonso. I'm honoured. Blessings.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2023 5:36:00 PM

This is a fantastic poem. Your thorough metaphor selection and perfect diction add another level of refinement to the outstanding verse you've crafted. Congrats on your win.

Thompson Emate
Date: 4/27/2023 8:55:00 AM

Thank you, Sotto Poet. I'm honoured.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/24/2023 10:01:00 AM

The course of a tumbleweed depends on the wind, Best to have a direction in life, Thompson. I know you do in reality. I read you all of the time but these were my thoughts after reading your poem.

Thompson Emate
Date: 4/24/2023 5:24:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel, for stopping by. Blessings.