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Kate and Bram, so in love or so she thought, but he was after Kate’s rich cousin. Laura, was just as greedy for Bram’s striking good looks. Does lightning strike twice for Bram? Will he find happiness with his fiance’s kin? Kate was prettier, confident, sweet. He moves the candle over the treasure and concocts a vicious plot. Laura was guilty of one thing - she coveted what was not hers. Bram’s sin was greater.
WAXING OF CANDLELIGHT Longing of candlelight - the shadows slim. A flicker steps downstairs; She’s trembling down. Kate’s tapered low-light tears, without a hymn. Green spirit in her phosphorescent gown.* She remembers Bram’s face, his smile. The bleed of blush no longer stings - a swan-like snow running from head to toe; done is the deed. The late night storm will search - its fury grow. The strike of lightning hate will court her beau. He tripped a switch - she fell headlong for him. The candle burns - the fire’s leaping stairs. Sow And reap - the pyre-steeple of life and limb. The separation - vinegar and oil. Reunited, Kate shrieks - Bram’s on slow boil. 7/30/2021 A BRIAN STRAND SONNET HMS used *Green - 1) color 2) new

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Date: 7/31/2021 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserved win!
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Date: 7/31/2021 5:04:00 AM
The separation - vinegar and oil. Reunited, Kate shrieks - Bram’s on slow boil. A typical write. Beautiful. Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2021 5:10:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 7/30/2021 6:32:00 PM
The imagery took me away, Kim. Mesmerizing! Good luck in the contest, Evelyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2021 6:34:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 7/30/2021 2:32:00 PM
Deep, dark, and mysterious. Wow. This one gives me the shivers. Outstanding poetry does will do that. Kudos, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2021 3:06:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 7/30/2021 9:24:00 AM
You could write a novelette with this poem. Finely done. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2021 10:22:00 AM
A big thank you, Victor! ~ hugs
Date: 7/30/2021 7:04:00 AM
gosh kim the imagery gave me shivers, so dark and deep, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2021 10:23:00 AM
Thank you, sweet poet! Hugs ~

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