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Waxing of Candlelight

Kate and Bram, so in love or so she thought, but he was after Kate’s rich cousin. Laura, was just as greedy for Bram’s striking good looks. Does lightning strike twice for Bram? Will he find happiness with his fiance’s kin? Kate was prettier, confident, sweet. He moves the candle over the treasure and concocts a vicious plot. Laura was guilty of one thing - she coveted what was not hers. Bram’s sin was greater.

WAXING OF CANDLELIGHT Longing of candlelight - the shadows slim. A flicker steps downstairs; She’s trembling down. Kate’s tapered low-light tears, without a hymn. Green spirit in her phosphorescent gown.* She remembers Bram’s face, his smile. The bleed of blush no longer stings - a swan-like snow running from head to toe; done is the deed. The late night storm will search - its fury grow. The strike of lightning hate will court her beau. He tripped a switch - she fell headlong for him. The candle burns - the fire’s leaping stairs. Sow And reap - the pyre-steeple of life and limb. The separation - vinegar and oil. Reunited, Kate shrieks - Bram’s on slow boil. 7/30/2021 A BRIAN STRAND SONNET HMS used *Green - 1) color 2) new
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Krutsinger Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 7:50 PM
Congratulations on your deserved win!
Alex Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 5:04 AM
The separation - vinegar and oil. Reunited, Kate shrieks - Bram’s on slow boil. A typical write. Beautiful. Congratulations on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 5:10 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Buehler Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 6:32 PM
The imagery took me away, Kim. Mesmerizing! Good luck in the contest, Evelyn
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Wolf Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 2:32 PM
Deep, dark, and mysterious. Wow. This one gives me the shivers. Outstanding poetry does will do that. Kudos, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 3:06 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 9:24 AM
You could write a novelette with this poem. Finely done. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 10:22 AM
A big thank you, Victor! ~ hugs
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 7:04 AM
gosh kim the imagery gave me shivers, so dark and deep, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 10:23 AM
Thank you, sweet poet! Hugs ~
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