Wax and Ink

Staying near to light my way
     now that there is no more day
You're needed to so brightly burn
     before to black ashes you return
Flames dance high upon your wick
     and fall across the well-worn brick
Like those flames once in the hearth
     when you go out there is no rebirth
My mind alight with persistent thought
     beaming from an inspiration caught
In ink my quill takes another dip
     my eyes watch your melting wax drip
Furiously now my script does flow
     to finish the lines before out you go
I can do no more, there is no time
     my slowing pen can no longer rhyme
The ink still wet, not even dry
     as your glow continues to die
Words on the page begin to fade
     while creeping darkness starts to shade
Wax and ink overtaken by night
     and devours all your candle's light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Greenhough Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 7:38 PM
I enjoyed this poem of great writing talent.it appears to be a scene from before electricity, perhaps 1500 to 1700? I can feel the surroundings of hearth and brick. The poem is a living writ.
Inman Avatar
April 4, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Love this Kelly, beautiful flow and wording. I could feel the tension as the candle grew dimmer. Also, a wonderful metaphor for someone whose life has been cut short.
Deschler Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Thank you once again for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poems... I appreciate that so much James :)
Nehls Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Hi Kelly. Such an amazing poem, not only about the writers life, but about all of life. As we grow older we seem to pay more attention to the flame and all the things that can cause it to flutter and disappear. A 7 and a favorite. Thanks for sharing, my friend...... Robert.
Deschler Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 1:16 PM
Thank you so much for reading and making this poem a favorite. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Robert :)
Nusker Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 1:10 AM
You are a very gifted poet, Kelly. I adore your poems. Another fav of mine.
Deschler Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 3:20 PM
I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poems, Afzal. I'm so glad that you're enjoying them... Thank you for the fav :)
Black Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Hello! First of all I would like to say that I'm very much impressed with your writing talent. This write is truly amazing especially with the flow of rhyming. This line is just magnificent - Like those flames once in the hearth when you go out there is no rebirth You are showing such a great respect to the candle. The paint of imaginary is also very just. Very well written. All the best.
Deschler Avatar
December 5, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, Augustus. I very much appreciate your kind comments :)
Breedt Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 4:10 AM
Love the imagery that this poèm conveys.
Deschler Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 7:56 PM
Thank you, Jannie. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 3:52 PM
I love this poem Kelly. It is a poet's poem expressing the urgency felt to scramble to write your thoughts before the lights go out, before the muse slips away, leaving before you are able finish. I am faving this poem! It speaks to the soul of every poet. ; ) 7
Deschler Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:47 PM
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, Connie. That is precisely what I wanted to capture in this poem. Those fleeting moments when our words and inspirations almost become lost if we don't write them down... I really appreciate the fave :)
May Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 8:44 AM
A profound analogy Kelly....Beautifully penned...
Deschler Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 6:23 PM
I appreciate your comments very much, Joseph. Thank you :)
Austin Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 12:19 PM
At my age - 87 - this piece communicates worlds. Your symbolism is devastating, but I shall recover. Very fine stuff. Love, daver
Deschler Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 7:06 PM
Too often people forget that time is always passing. We must do what we wish to before we realize that its too late... Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly, Daver. I appreciate that very much :)
Ogundare Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 6:37 AM
How we wish we could just grab the candle and stop it from waxing yet burning so we could keep writing, nice one Kelly. AWESOME!
Deschler Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 6:34 PM
Absolutely... Too often we forget that our time to do the things we wish is very limited... Thank you for your kind comments. I appreciate them very much :)
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2016 at 1:15 PM
- In light of just candles ... your thoughts flow freely - Enjoy reading this poem, Kelly - A really great work ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on this poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Anne-Lise... Hugs :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 1:31 PM
wow, i am breathless at the moment... you spill ink with this glorious work, kelly!... huggs
Deschler Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Thank you so much, Nette, for your kind comments, as always :)
Warrior Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Superbly done Kelly...like poets of old...your verses be told...by candles lit..where the darkened sit lol...god bless...^WW^
Deschler Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Thank you so much for reading, WW. I truly appreciate your kind words on this poem :)
Kiser Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 11:11 AM
I also enjoy writing by candlelight, usually with a quill; somehow it takes me back in time and enhances my creativity. This is wonderful.
Deschler Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, M.L... I always write my poems with a pen and paper. It just feels right and much more natural for me :)
Ainsley Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 9:46 PM
So many nights are blessed by candles tears ;lovely you sweet romantic.
Deschler Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly, Michael. I appreciate that very much!
Mcconnell Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Great penning Kelly , nice rhyme and flow too. Trust life's good with you, blessings, Gordon
Deschler Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Thank you, Gordon. I appreciate your kind comments... All is well here. I have not been around Poetry Soup that much lately. Just busy enjoying this nice summer weather and tending to my garden :)
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