Waving By-Bye

He clipped another one out of the news
The head on collision of Mr. Bob Hughes
Tacking it to his wall, he laughed to himself
Those trusting fools, he’d so kindly “helped”
He never thought he would like his work
But being a garbage man sure had its perks!

When stopped on a curve or on top of a hill
He waved people on, instantly thrilled
If another car was coming from the opposite direction
They made the most beautiful metal-to-metal connections 
And the best part about it, was that if they survived,
They had no memory of him waving them by!

His wall’s almost full of people like Bob
Trying to get home, or on to their jobs
So don’t let his uniform fool your eyes
Just ask yourself this before you pass by -
Is the smiling man on the garbage truck
Helping me out, or setting me up? 

If you just wait, seconds, minutes, to go,
Instead of trusting someone you don’t even know
You’ll have a better chance of staying alive
And not ending up on the wall of foolish drivers,
Where he especially loves pictures of smashed up cars,
To post above his articles, like golden stars        


9/28/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 6, 2013 at 6:32 PM
Love the imagery-Skat
A   Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 3:12 PM
Hola Susan*<3 Congratulations with your wonderful and lovely poem. Sending small simple smiles all over the soup. Love-Linda
Macfarlane Avatar
April 4, 2013 at 11:21 AM
I had a fender bender with a garbage truck last month, was it caused by the snow and ice or was I just another golden star? LOL....Excellent write and win! Hugs
May Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 8:44 AM
congrats on your win Susan
Jones Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 6:46 AM
Yeah its scary there are really people like this out there. Great win congrats. Donna
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April 1, 2013 at 4:02 AM
Congrats on your win Susan~ A.O
Minardi Avatar
March 31, 2013 at 8:26 PM
this was so scary, Susan. And you concluded at the end with a great stanza. congrats on your win :)
Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 8:14 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Fine Line" contest Susan. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:51 PM
Congrats Susan on your win.Enjoyed your poem.
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:23 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Susan
A   Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 9:19 AM
Hi! Susan,, how are you? I have not seen you much on the soup... i was wondering about that contest of yours,,, anyways,,,,, i don't know about that line,,, but i try my hardest not to cross anything evill thank you for sharing,,,p.d.
Ramage Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 1:12 AM
Great poem, love it. Lee
Jones Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Creative approach to a creative and multifaceted take on the theme. Wow, Susan, sure do like crawlin' around in that mind of yours! Thanks so much for the write and for your support of the contest. Beauty eve to ya! Namaste~N
La France Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 6:19 PM
I really enjoyed this Susan, you are a wonderful writer, best of luck in the contest and I want to thank you so very much for my win in your couplet contest, I am very honored and pleased ~~
Sweetheart Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 11:22 PM
wow Susan an intricate and touching story.. luv the opening lines and stanza.. setting the tone of this magnifico write ..luv..
Jones Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 10:36 PM
wow... harsh... do believe I'll sleep on this one. Thanks very muchly, Susan~N
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