Waving At October

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Waving at October...! welcome the rain, watching leaves flying to die. Between colours and cold, new changes to breath

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/23/2023 1:24:00 AM

I admire your imagery. Rain is important. We don't get much of it in Malta. Which leads to allergies. Blessings.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/23/2023 2:18:00 AM

Yes, Victor. Same here in Spain. But now it has been raining for 3 weeks. Climate change. Thanks for your lovely words. Have a wonderful day Victor.

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/19/2023 2:33:00 PM

awesome poem, really enjoyed your inspirations, thank you Maria

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/19/2023 10:27:00 PM

Thank you very much Yann. Have a great dayxxxx

Ink Empress

Date: 10/19/2023 2:12:00 AM

Love this and as i read this it’s raining, how beautifully you’ve waved at october. Imagery here is absolutely stunning. wishing you a beautiful day

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/19/2023 2:27:00 AM

Glad you liked Ink. Here it has been raining for a week and still raining too. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Have a great day you too.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/18/2023 3:49:00 PM

nicely done, Maria. I'm waving at October and welcoming her rain just as you described it in your poem. Indeed new changes are on the horizon. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 10/18/2023 3:57:00 PM

Hello Sara. I hope that the new rain brings a new beginning to everybody. Thank you so much Sara. Have a new evening too!