waves recede

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Bitesize no107 Contest of Line Gauthier...8 Apr 25 Modern Haiku

waves recede as thunder howls on coast--- silencing the gulls

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/10/2025 11:08:00 AM

Nette, As I read this, I'm thinking how powerful the thunder is. It does a lot including scaring me sometimes. Take care! Smiles!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/9/2025 5:49:00 PM

Spot-on depiction of the 'silencing of the gulls.' Thunderations! ~ Gershon

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/8/2025 3:13:00 PM

Nette, this poem is where I live, near the Gulf of Mexico- there are a lot of gulls

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/8/2025 1:25:00 PM

woooo (is that how to spell woooo? I'm being silly). Maybe whoosh? A wooo whooshed thru me whilst I read. Think I need a nap or, maybe, to giggle. Enjoyed ... CayCay

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/8/2025 1:26:00 PM

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