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Andrea Dietrich's Your Best Ever Creative Haiku ... modern haiku...entered 11 may 25

waves recede


waves recede---
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     thunder howls on shore

silencing the gulls

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Andrea Dietrich

May 26, 2025 at 7:47 PM

Gorgeous imagery, Nette. Congrats

JC Brul

May 26, 2025 at 5:37 PM

Stunning!! This is one of the best haikus I've ever read. Congratulations. ^___^

Duke Beaufort

April 10, 2025 at 11:08 AM

Nette, As I read this, I'm thinking how powerful the thunder is. It does a lot including scaring me sometimes. Take care! Smiles!

Gershon Wolf

April 9, 2025 at 5:49 PM

Spot-on depiction of the 'silencing of the gulls.' Thunderations! ~ Gershon

Frederic Parker

April 8, 2025 at 3:13 PM

Nette, this poem is where I live, near the Gulf of Mexico- there are a lot of gulls

CayCay Godwin

April 8, 2025 at 1:25 PM

woooo (is that how to spell woooo? I'm being silly). Maybe whoosh? A wooo whooshed thru me whilst I read. Think I need a nap or, maybe, to giggle. Enjoyed ... CayCay

CayCay Godwin

April 8, 2025 at 1:26 PM

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