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Andrea Dietrich's Your Best Ever Creative Haiku ... modern haiku...entered 11 may 25
waves recede--- . .. ~ ~ ~ thunder howls on shore silencing the gulls

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Date: 5/26/2025 7:47:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery, Nette. Congrats
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Date: 5/26/2025 5:37:00 PM
Stunning!! This is one of the best haikus I've ever read. Congratulations. ^___^
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Date: 4/10/2025 11:08:00 AM
Nette, As I read this, I'm thinking how powerful the thunder is. It does a lot including scaring me sometimes. Take care! Smiles!
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Date: 4/9/2025 5:49:00 PM
Spot-on depiction of the 'silencing of the gulls.' Thunderations! ~ Gershon
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Date: 4/8/2025 3:13:00 PM
Nette, this poem is where I live, near the Gulf of Mexico- there are a lot of gulls
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Date: 4/8/2025 1:25:00 PM
woooo (is that how to spell woooo? I'm being silly). Maybe whoosh? A wooo whooshed thru me whilst I read. Think I need a nap or, maybe, to giggle. Enjoyed ... CayCay
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Date: 4/8/2025 1:26:00 PM
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