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Waves of Memories

Grey hair blown by the cool evening sea breeze as he sat alone in the dark verandah, riding through a maze of past events on a wooden rocking chair, with his trembling fingers he slowly etched memoirs in thin air.

a letter of love
to his departed dear wife
hope we meet again


Wrote 07/07/2020
1st placement
Line Gauthier sponsored
Memory poetry contest Haibun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 7/26/2020 7:32:00 AM
Such a heartwarming memory Krish. Congratulations on your top win. Blessings :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/26/2020 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Aditi. Old age and solitude! Warm regards
Date: 7/14/2020 1:27:00 PM
Beautiful piece Krish, so touching. Congratulations for your top win! xomo
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Date: 7/14/2020 3:17:00 PM
Thanks very much!:) pleased you like it! Best wishes
Date: 7/14/2020 1:05:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/14/2020 1:52:00 AM
Thank you Beata! My sincere good wishes and thanks to you!
Date: 7/13/2020 5:21:00 PM
Congrats on your top win !
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/13/2020 11:53:00 PM
Thanks Line, Honoured,It is picked as a top Haibun! Enjoyed writing this format that I am new to! My sincere regards
Date: 7/8/2020 11:17:00 PM
So sweet, Krish. You are a talented haibun poet, my friend. Enjoyed the memoir! :) gw
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/9/2020 12:24:00 AM
Gershon, thank you for the lovely words. Always a pleasure to receive your feedback. Kind regards.
Date: 7/8/2020 1:03:00 AM
Wow.. Splendid entry Krish.. Beautifully penned.. Good luck..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/8/2020 1:27:00 AM
Thanks Jenish! Much appreciated my friend!
Date: 7/7/2020 8:53:00 PM
Excellent entry my friend. Great words that I hope will win for you. God bless you always with much love and a beautiful muse.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/8/2020 12:03:00 AM
Thank you Gina! Good wishes to you. Much appreciate your kind words of support! Regards

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