Waves Of Blissfulness

Beaming eyeballs,
   and orbs,
       from first blush,
     offspring  frolicsome,
   as they dot,
geosmin odoured pavement,
       whilst shrieking impishly,
        with infectious,
          cuddly cheep,
     parents shepherd,
     yet they exude,
      at bounce captured, 
   cordial conducive, 
    in electrifying, 
         picturesque swathe,
    orange-scorched oriole,  
     with coal-black plume,
       on urban shade tree,
townscape as hub,
      endowed cosmopolitan,
   brimful brio, ginger, dash,
     kundalini wakened,
 as sultry vault, 
        vigilant ambience,
             ample alignment to,
           ice tea  mint gust,
     aroma mediating, 
        splash of amber sun wash,
         neath navy welkins, 
       that taunt and sketch,
      wooing  ambit,
         extracts of,
           aroha’s
             indigo index
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Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 5:48 PM
Lots of images of things that bring bliss . Very imaginative, Howard
Kendrick Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 6:03 AM
Quite a descriptive morning(?) I am also wondering is that ducks crossing an asphalt road. LOL..Way to go.👏. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 6:26 AM
Grateful I am, Sara, always for your feedback. I was describing a certain type of oriole bird species that is characterised by the colours I used. Black plume could also be used instead of coal-black. Warm wishes Howard
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August 24, 2026 at 3:27 AM
Howard, this poem paints vivid imagery with its playful language and lively descriptions. The use of color and movement through words like "orange-scorched oriole" and "frolicsome offspring" creates a vibrant scene. It captures a moment full of life and joy, almost like a snapshot of a bustling day. Your imagery is captivating, and your lines enhance clarity. Keep experimenting with these creative expressions, as they add unique beauty to your work!
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