Sara Ella Poet Free verse

Waves - Collaboration With Darren White

Sound currents
     invisible caresses
     on sensitive skin
resonate

Rays of sunlight
     dazzled display 
     adorns brown curls
radiate

Pirouette whirls
     personal cyclone
     lifts off
surges up

crests the arc
     internal elation 
     revels in the moment 
timeless

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Eric Ashford August 12, 2019 at 3:42 PM Good one Sara and Darren it all holds together well. Sara Ella August 12, 2019 at 9:04 PM Thank you, Eric :)

Billy Jones December 2, 2018 at 5:32 AM Nice one a very good Poem look forward to more! Sara Ella December 2, 2018 at 9:20 AM Thank you Billy! :) I enjoyed writing this one with Darren very much.

Carole Duet November 21, 2018 at 1:51 PM What an unusual and imaginative poem! I can see it all. You two obviously work very well together.

Patricia Cresswell January 23, 2018 at 1:48 PM Timeless, in a world of ones own. Sara Ella January 23, 2018 at 11:13 PM That’s exactly right Patricia :)

Akkina Downing January 15, 2018 at 2:50 PM Oh this is so mind relaxing. I really enjoyed it. Awesome job Sara and Darren! Hugs and smiles :) Sara Ella January 15, 2018 at 4:05 PM Thank You Akkina! We had a lot of fun writing it! :)

Darren White January 12, 2018 at 12:43 PM Is cool, isn't it, my friend? I love it, and it was fantastic again, working with you <3 Sara Ella January 12, 2018 at 6:38 PM Thank you my friend :) Writing poetry with you is so much fun! <3

Arturo Michael January 8, 2018 at 5:21 AM The opening stanza is fantastic...Lovely poem...All the best to both of you Sara Ella January 8, 2018 at 6:24 AM Thank you Arturo! :)

Arthur Vaso January 7, 2018 at 9:52 PM What a beautiful lovely poem, great collab!! Loved this. Sara Ella January 7, 2018 at 9:54 PM Thank you Art! We had fun making this :)