Waves Break

waves break on the shore climbing higher as they go ... sand fortresses fall

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Cory Long

Date: 6/29/2011 6:56:00 AM

I love it!! nicely penned. cory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2011 5:54:00 PM

This is an excellent haiku, Francine. Much enjoyed.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/25/2011 8:47:00 AM

Nice one Francis and thank you for your kind comment on When time has come! I remembered a novel by Agatha Christie I read nong time ago and with that one also the "Sad Cypresses". I am sorry that my right hand and arm are still a handicap for me amd painful. Have a great weekend! Do you know German? ...All the best, Gert:)

James Fraser

Date: 6/23/2011 11:51:00 AM

Many a Fortress has secumbed to such awesome forces, whether light or stormy. Nice one Francine :)