Waves Break

waves break on the shore

     climbing higher as they go
 
            ... sand fortresses fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 29, 2011 at 6:56 AM
I love it!! nicely penned. cory
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June 27, 2011 at 5:54 PM
This is an excellent haiku, Francine. Much enjoyed.
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June 25, 2011 at 8:47 AM
Nice one Francis and thank you for your kind comment on When time has come! I remembered a novel by Agatha Christie I read nong time ago and with that one also the "Sad Cypresses". I am sorry that my right hand and arm are still a handicap for me amd painful. Have a great weekend! Do you know German? ...All the best, Gert:)
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June 23, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Many a Fortress has secumbed to such awesome forces, whether light or stormy. Nice one Francine :)
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