Waves

waves; 

heartbreak comes in waves
in fact, life comes in waves
all is calm and then 
it suddenly rushes over you
a sea of nuances
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 11, 2017 at 6:55 AM
That's a poem that works very well, gives a feeling of total estrangement. That's increased even by the repetition of the first three lines.
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October 11, 2017 at 6:49 AM
It's true, I like this comparison of life as waves.
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