Waves

Waves Tsunamis rush across space and time, taking out all of reality, leaving in their wakes remnants of the ethers spirit. As day light hours subjugate dreams impressions one wonders ?, where lies the true essence of ones life. Might it be ?, the dreamers dream is his reality and his perception of reality – but a dream ? For some, a nightmare in either state or both have been their fate. Whatever the case might be ?. – for you and me, we – in order to survive – will have to ride tsunamis wave across time and space and make the best life , for us can be until that day comes, when it all comes together in the grave. B. J. “A ” 2 June 15th 2005

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Kp Nunez

Date: 2/14/2015 11:14:00 AM

Tsunami rush and tsunami waves... trials and tests...after which a stronger, wiser and a better fighter shall emerge...Wishing you a happy Valentine's sire...HUgs and smiles from the land of thousand isles :D Kim

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/16/2015 3:57:00 PM

Good afternoon Kim : Once again Kim, I am thankful for your visits and comments. “ ABOUT LAST NIGHT ” is it ?, or was it ?, a personal experience, or just the dream of possibilities, a desire ? I do hope, it was for you, a piece of reality !!! Such a beautiful way to spend Valentine’s day and every day in-between . Having just read some of the enormous amount of comments on “ ABOUT LAST NIGHT ” I discovered that my hopes for your Valentines “ Been in my treasure chest for sometime...just now that I had the guts to come out with, ” was not a reality ?, as far as your poems essence is concerned .

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/16/2015 3:56:00 PM

Yes they do “ Tsunami rush and tsunami waves... ” my Dear, and they certainly do give Mother Earth, Mother Nature and mankind “ trials and tests... ” for which they come out “ stronger, wiser and a better fighter ” most of the time . I do not seem to be getting notification on gmail of “ Your poem has received a comment on PoetrySoup. ” which is why I have taken this long to answer you Kim. Found your above comment by accident. And so Kim, if you do not get a reply to any further comments you post, it will because I have not been notified. My apologies in advance my Dear . Back at you my Dear “Wishing you a happy Valentine's Princess...HUgs and smiles from the land of ” it seems - perpetual liquid sunshine ( rain ) . B. J. “A” 2 (( Bill . ))

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/13/2015 8:21:00 AM

beautiful pen William... we need to overcome the barriers in life...

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/13/2015 12:21:00 PM

Good morning poesy relish : So nice to see that you have taken the time to visit my site, comment and even more so, to see your sincere praise “ beautiful pen ” and yes my Dear, “ we need to overcome the barriers in life... ”. My simple philosophy, poesy relish, is this, live each moment to the fullest, suck the life out of it, for it only comes around but once . “ First Kiss ” is every kiss my Dear, especially for this man who loves kissing, but never has the opportunity any more. “ Mysterious Love ” and isn’t it ??? How many of us want one to be “ My Valentine ” oh how many of us are looking for “ *** Lets dance *** ”, “ *** Be mine *** ” and to be “ *** Yours forever *** ”. Valentines Dream !!! B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )