Waves

Waves



The new day was dawning

When I opened my eyes

The stars had been covered 

By the Clouds passing by


A whisper of waves rolling along the seashore

I spotted them when I opened the door

They tried to gently pass on by

They were caught in the act

By a rumble in the sky


They were gone, as fast as they came

They’ll reappear to finish their game

They’ll roll and play gently in the sea

As long as I am quiet, they won’t hear me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/24/2011 10:40:00 AM
very cute....chuckled as I envisioned a game of 'red light green light' between you and the wave...
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Adrienne Gresham
Date: 7/26/2011 11:32:00 AM
Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it
Date: 7/9/2011 7:07:00 PM
Liked this one immensely, great imagery and for some reason, slightly haunting :) "Write on good poet." -TimB
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Adrienne Gresham
Date: 7/26/2011 11:34:00 AM
Thank you and your comment makes me smile for some reason I think it's the 'slightly haunting?'
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