Waves

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Placed Second in: Pyramids Poetry Contest of Joseph May

                                                     WAVES
                                                      ripples
                                                curving shapes

                                              sweet recollections
                                        of cuddling sands on beach
                                       during dreamy days of youth

                                    "footprints on shore fade in a while."

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Joseph May

Date: 8/20/2025 5:00:00 PM

Congrats on your win Very nicely penned

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2025 2:39:00 PM

Very nice. Remember to put quotation marks around your final line. I hope to see this one with a win

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/19/2025 9:44:00 AM

Hello Guptar, the sound of the waves are relaxing. as they rush to shore. It erases sand castles from the sand. Waves are used for surfers to I am sorry it was for meant for Lin. this will not happen again my friend. Thank you for sending me the light. I hope all is we with you. /Darlene/