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Placed Second in: Pyramids Poetry Contest of Joseph May

Waves

                                                     WAVES
                                                      ripples
                                                curving shapes

                                              sweet recollections
                                        of cuddling sands on beach
                                       during dreamy days of youth

                                    "footprints on shore fade in a while."
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Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:54 AM
Yay!! Congrats
May Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 5:00 PM
Congrats on your win Very nicely penned
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 2:39 PM
Very nice. Remember to put quotation marks around your final line. I hope to see this one with a win
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 9:44 AM
Hello Guptar, the sound of the waves are relaxing. as they rush to shore. It erases sand castles from the sand. Waves are used for surfers to I am sorry it was for meant for Lin. this will not happen again my friend. Thank you for sending me the light. I hope all is we with you. /Darlene/
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