Waves

I am getting tired of the tidal waves
That bring me to shore,
Spit me out and drag me in once more.
I am tired of the crest dropping
And the trough getting deeper,
While the pain in life gets steeper.
I am not always under,
But I haven’t learned to surf the top.
Arriving at the trough and wondering
When the pain is going to just stop.
I am tired of the drama that sets the waves into motion
And I wish that the voices in my head would stop their commotion.
The crest of the waves are moments,
But the troughs are drawn out loud and long,
The crest might spit positive emotion
While the tough brings a tearful drowning song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 11/8/2023 11:14:00 AM
IN LIFE WE TOIL WITH TRAILS AND TRIBULATIONS. BUT WITH SOMEONE WHO COMPLIMENTS OUR LIVES, LIKE IN YOUR POEM WE CAN WEATHER THE STORMS. BEAUTIFUL POETRY-
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Date: 8/8/2023 3:41:00 PM
Lovely message, I can totally relate!
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Date: 8/8/2023 6:33:00 AM
A moving poem. I completely understand this experience. Best wishes and take care. :-)
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 8/8/2023 9:34:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by. Glad I can make this understandable.
Date: 7/19/2023 8:59:00 PM
I could not find a poem of yours I had not commented to, but I clicked on your best poem, according to Soup, and it's this gem here that I faved!
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/20/2023 11:06:00 AM
Gald you like it.
Date: 10/3/2021 1:54:00 PM
Miranda, I like your style of writing so much. So much to feel, Andrea's comment got it so right!
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/4/2021 9:50:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 12/13/2019 7:12:00 PM
this is a very good expression of feelings, Miranda. FAVE
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 10/4/2021 9:50:00 AM
Thank you!
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