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Four Haiku 

tides cycle around ebbing back turquoise seas ripples tease waves swim fathoms deep return navy blue seas smiles of pearl foam surf current of waves navy blue roads flow salty drinks on deck aquarium seas whales sharks dolphins trout waves vehicle rides

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Date: 9/25/2018 8:14:00 AM
Ronald, great imagery, I like the first haiku the most.Warren
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 9/25/2018 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Warren. You are in the majority.
Date: 8/9/2018 8:18:00 PM
Hello Ronald I like the first one. It sounds right to me. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/13/2018 6:15:00 PM
Be Blessed my friend. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 8/9/2018 8:51:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, Blessings. Glad that you liked the poem.
Date: 6/21/2018 7:40:00 PM
the first one is definitely the better one , if that is what you want to know, Ronald. I loved that one. It just sounds better to me.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/21/2018 8:10:00 PM
Hi Andrea, that sounds very cool. So far two out of three that I know of like the first one. I am glad that you enjoyed the poem. Amen, Blessings
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/21/2018 8:09:00 PM
Hi Andrea, that sounds very cool. So far two out of 3 that I know of like the first one. I and you enjoyed the poem. Amen, Blessings
Date: 6/18/2018 9:58:00 AM
Lovely imagery!
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/18/2018 7:11:00 PM
Just made a haiku combo poem. Blessings
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/18/2018 4:09:00 PM
I just fine tuned the poem for a more perfect write. Amen, Blessings
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/18/2018 10:00:00 AM
Thanks again Vijay, my noted friend indeed. Blessings