Notes About The Poem

Four Haiku 

Waves

tides cycle around
ebbing back turquoise seas
ripples tease

waves swim fathoms deep
return navy blue seas
smiles of pearl foam

surf current of waves
navy blue roads flow
salty drinks on deck

aquarium seas
whales sharks dolphins trout
waves vehicle rides
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Doll Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Ronald, great imagery, I like the first haiku the most.Warren
Williams Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Thanks Warren. You are in the majority.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Hello Ronald I like the first one. It sounds right to me. have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Be Blessed my friend. Have a nice evening my friend.
Williams Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 8:51 PM
Thanks Darlene, Blessings. Glad that you liked the poem.
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 7:40 PM
the first one is definitely the better one , if that is what you want to know, Ronald. I loved that one. It just sounds better to me.
Williams Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 8:10 PM
Hi Andrea, that sounds very cool. So far two out of three that I know of like the first one. I am glad that you enjoyed the poem. Amen, Blessings
Williams Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 8:09 PM
Hi Andrea, that sounds very cool. So far two out of 3 that I know of like the first one. I and you enjoyed the poem. Amen, Blessings
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Lovely imagery!
Williams Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Just made a haiku combo poem. Blessings
Williams Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 4:09 PM
I just fine tuned the poem for a more perfect write. Amen, Blessings
Williams Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Thanks again Vijay, my noted friend indeed. Blessings
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