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Wavelets

Little wavelets played across the lake Dancing their way towards the shore. Such pretty patterns did they make As the heightening wind created more. In a hurried rush, across they sped The ones behind pushed those who led. Their destination finally reached, They crashed, upon the shingle beach.

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Date: 11/15/2016 9:56:00 AM
Gary , so wonderfully penned CONGRATULATIONS.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/15/2016 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Broken Wings.
Date: 11/15/2016 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations. I like the imagery and the sea is my friend. Many wishes, Kai
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/15/2016 9:39:00 AM
Thank you Kai.
Date: 11/14/2016 9:58:00 PM
Congrats on your playful poem!
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/15/2016 4:48:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 11/13/2016 1:20:00 PM
I love this one Gary. It is going into my favorites. A 7 :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/13/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/13/2016 8:40:00 AM
What a charming rhyme Gary I love the description of the waves - I live close to the sea and can relate so much:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/13/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thank you Jan.

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