Wavelets

Little wavelets played across the lake

Dancing their way towards the shore.

Such pretty patterns did they make

As the heightening wind created more.

In a hurried rush, across they sped

The ones behind pushed those who led.

Their destination finally reached,

They crashed, upon the shingle beach.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Gary , so wonderfully penned CONGRATULATIONS.
Smith Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 12:20 PM
Thank you Broken Wings.
Neumann Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations. I like the imagery and the sea is my friend. Many wishes, Kai
Smith Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Thank you Kai.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 9:58 PM
Congrats on your playful poem!
Smith Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 4:48 AM
Thank you Kim.
Sands Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 1:20 PM
I love this one Gary. It is going into my favorites. A 7 :)
Smith Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Thank you Heidi, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 8:40 AM
What a charming rhyme Gary I love the description of the waves - I live close to the sea and can relate so much:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Jan.
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