David Kavanagh Poet Monoku

Wave of Fantasy

a really good brainwave ~ leaves nothing to the imagination 

  breathtakingly deep ~ dreams may be ~ surfing on the edge of fantasy 


Wave Of Fantasy Poetry Contest
Sponsored by mystic Rose rose
Monoku form
Howmanysyllables 2x17
02/14/23

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Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2023 at 2:27 AM - Woow ... very well written :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs David Kavanagh February 15, 2023 at 2:46 AM Thank you Anne Lise, glad you enjoyed the trip into my surreal world, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar February 15, 2023 at 2:05 AM Excellent brainwave. Best for a win. David Kavanagh February 15, 2023 at 2:43 AM Heya Victor, I often wonder if they come to us directly, or do we stumble on them serendipitously, cheers David

I Am Anaya February 14, 2023 at 1:13 PM Tap into good vibes and surf the waves of your fantasies! I read somewhere that... "Contrary to what you might think, brainwaves aren’t a physical thing—they’re a measurement of activity that’s going on within your brain." Great contender for Mistic's contest! David Kavanagh February 14, 2023 at 1:50 PM Heya Anaya, brainwaves are very curious and helpful things indeed well sometimes anyway. But they can backfire too if acted on with impulse, probably best to sleep on them, if still looks good next day, hell yeah go for it! Cheers David

Heidi Sands February 14, 2023 at 11:42 AM Excellent writing :) David Kavanagh February 14, 2023 at 12:07 PM Thank you Heidi, I appreciate your visit and comment, cheers David