Wautoma

Wautoma

The stillness of a gentle breeze.
The rustling of the fallen leaves.
Sun shines through the naked trees.
Flowers being pollinated by the bees.
Ashes waft up from the fire pit,
Where last night a large fire was lit.
Lunch cooked on an open fire.
Birds in a line perched on a wire.
Surrounded by the clean, frseh air.
The wind swirls and styles my hair.
Water pumped up from the ground.
Food grows in abundance all around.
The smell of smoke mixed with pine.
It's peaceful here, i'm feeling fine.
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October 10, 2018 at 9:00 PM
Beautiful
Haight Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 5:57 PM
Very peaceful thoughts in your lovely Rhyme, Alycia! Congrats on your Podium win. Sandra
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September 17, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Thank you :)
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September 15, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Lovely Alycia! Congratulations on your deserving second placement! : )
Wheatley Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 5:36 PM
I'm so surprised! Thank you.
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September 14, 2018 at 9:43 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your podium finish with this beauty, Alycia.
Wheatley Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 5:36 PM
I'm blushing. Thank you.
Lindley Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 4:50 PM
You took me there with this refreshing and inspiring verse on the beauty and blessings of Nature. I could smell the smoke dancing as it curls around the pines.. A gem and a fav my friend..
Wolf Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 4:28 PM
A lovely rhyme. Great finishing couplet too. I love the smell of certain trees, especially like pine.
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