Watertight

how does one opine
     with one’s eyes shut watertight?

             — open wisdom’s dam

1/15/2018
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Trifiatis Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Superbly written dear, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Thank you, Demetrios! :)
Tripp Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Very great advice in a few lines. Love the way this is written.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Thank you, Rhoda! :)
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 4:06 PM
BRILLIANT I love it Kim such a clever poem!!!:-) hugs jan xx faves:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Thanks so much, dear Jan! Good to be home again and writing! Blessings to you!
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