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Waterspouts

Coming down So far away Putting on such a display One then two One goes up Then comes three Four thank God There is no gore Five way out side Six picking up fish Then thunder crash Lighting flash Better get inside Hoping no boat Caught in the storm Thankful protected Not needing to alarm Never thought Lived to see the day When the waterspouts did play

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/6/2009 5:12:00 PM
You stole my idea, good job though
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Date: 8/6/2009 9:52:00 AM
Cool poem relating to the marvel of waterspouts, nice write Sara>>James
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Date: 8/6/2009 9:36:00 AM
great imagery. Excellent. Thanks for your kind comments Sara. Love, Meg.
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Date: 8/6/2009 7:05:00 AM
very cool sounds mixed but is very together.
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