Waterspouts

Coming down 
So far away
Putting on such a display
One then two

One goes up
Then comes three
Four thank God
There is no gore

Five way out side
Six picking up fish
Then thunder crash
Lighting flash

Better get inside
Hoping no boat 
Caught in the storm
Thankful protected 

Not needing to alarm
Never thought
Lived to see the day
When the waterspouts did play
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 5:12 PM
You stole my idea, good job though
Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 9:52 AM
Cool poem relating to the marvel of waterspouts, nice write Sara>>James
Okubo Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 9:36 AM
great imagery. Excellent. Thanks for your kind comments Sara. Love, Meg.
Arteaga Avatar
August 6, 2009 at 7:05 AM
very cool sounds mixed but is very together.
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