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Water beneath, rental boat, sky above, grandpa the pilot in controL, Advancing swiftly, feeling the love, adult and kids' eyes full of euphorA, Tension in the towline, pulling strong, everyone full of cheerS, Exultant joy, where we all belong, riding the speeding boaT, Riding waves, board underfoot, lifejacket strapped, dragged by keeL, Speeding forth with balance and skill, meandering in the lakE, Kinetic energy, a constant thrill, increasing speed, more fuN, In every carve, in every glide, joy glows in eyeS, In sync with nature, side by side, harmony with naturE, Navigating waves, created by the boat, feeling maturE, Gliding on the board, freedom at hand, thrill of lifetimeS.

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Date: 7/7/2024 5:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jay, Very nicely penned
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Date: 7/6/2024 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Double Acrostic write. What a great picture you have here. If I tried this, I would kill myself. Hahaha!!! Have a great day/weekend..............
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Date: 6/26/2024 9:13:00 PM
Wonderful acrostic! You have nailed it. All the Best in the contest.
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