Waters View

Time stands still, stuck in the past, secrets within 
Disintegrating into the earth, letting go, for all to find
Trenches dug in, a kettle is formed, revealing treasures below.

Small spaces confine, delicate with life
Cloaked in murky waters, placid after all
A pond gives way, to flourishing unseen. 

Countless ripples throughout, depths lurking beneath 
Edges run out of sight, encompassed by land
Lakes of clean, fresh water, awakening into view.






Written: 7 March 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 1:08 PM
I liked the way cloaked in murky waters led to fresh, clean waters. It is refreshing.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Hello Amya, you paint a pretty picture with your words. Have a nice evening my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.Have a nice day my friend.
Ranck Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Thank you very much
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