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Waters View

Time stands still, stuck in the past, secrets within Disintegrating into the earth, letting go, for all to find Trenches dug in, a kettle is formed, revealing treasures below. Small spaces confine, delicate with life Cloaked in murky waters, placid after all A pond gives way, to flourishing unseen. Countless ripples throughout, depths lurking beneath Edges run out of sight, encompassed by land Lakes of clean, fresh water, awakening into view. Written: 7 March 2018

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Date: 3/8/2018 1:08:00 PM
I liked the way cloaked in murky waters led to fresh, clean waters. It is refreshing.
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Date: 3/7/2018 7:51:00 PM
Hello Amya, you paint a pretty picture with your words. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2018 2:23:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.Have a nice day my friend.
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Amya Ranck
Date: 3/7/2018 9:54:00 PM
Thank you very much

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