T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet Poet Dodoitsu

Waters For Me

Sounds of relaxation
Cool water over sore feet
warm rounded river rocks dry 
lay your head here rest a bit
trickeling water sounding 
Teresa Skyles
Entered in John Freeman's"Dodoitsu"contest

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Debbie Guzzi February 21, 2011 at 1:16 PM Soup Mail! Light & Love

Michael J. Falotico February 13, 2011 at 2:33 PM Yes a beautiful Dodoitsu... so well written and constructed...luv Michael

Carolyn Devonshire February 13, 2011 at 1:53 PM Oh, that's so lovely, Teresa. John will LOVE it!! Congrats in advance, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2011 at 1:46 PM I love this one, Teresa. Sounds like a terrific spot to rest and hear those sweet sounds. a highest rating!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 13, 2011 at 1:19 PM Beautiful thoughts flowing throughout your lines Theresa my friend... good luck in the contest.. this is one I could not enter but your entry is a sure winner... much success and hope all is well with u luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta February 13, 2011 at 1:02 PM Nice picture with beautiful images created in this write, Teresa

Francine Roberts February 13, 2011 at 1:01 PM lovely image you've created, you have soup mail