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Watermelon Mouths

~tangy flavor drips
     on watermelon’s skin pink…
         brushing kneaded mouths

flesh of summer pulp
     pops with zing  like frothy cream…
          to thrill nibbling bites

 breaths in rhapsody
      trailing juicy midnight love…
            when melon lips meet



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Carol Brown’s Lips Contest  senryu
by nette onclaud

happinessromancesenryu

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 27, 2012 at 11:08 AM

Thank you for your support of my contest and congratulations on your well deserved win Nette. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

July 25, 2012 at 5:02 PM

((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

David Williams

July 25, 2012 at 3:52 AM

Nette, super congrats on your win, excellent write..a lovely set of senryu's...David

Joann Grisetti

July 24, 2012 at 7:28 PM

Tasty, watermelon on a hot day. Congratulations.

Joy Wellington

July 24, 2012 at 7:19 PM

Congrats Nette on your third place win. One love. Joy Wells

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 24, 2012 at 5:50 PM

congrats Nette luv on a super fantastic write and win.. how creative ..both title and content my friend..

Debbie Guzzi

July 24, 2012 at 5:05 PM

Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love

Jane Kostman

July 24, 2012 at 12:31 PM

so cute i like this poem jane xoxo

Debbie Duncan

July 20, 2012 at 8:34 PM

I love watermelon,,,,, reminds me of eating them in our garden as a kid after we picked them with our mom,,,, love fruit,,,,,, was just eating blueberries,,,,a mango this morning ;}

Matthew Anish

July 19, 2012 at 12:38 PM

Nice, refreshing poem for summer! Good luck in the contest. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

July 18, 2012 at 5:34 PM

hey , I had boysenberry mouth and you had melon. I love them both!!! Food makes everything better, and lips too. YUM!!! awesome.

Wilma Neels

July 18, 2012 at 11:42 AM

Nette, what a fab write for Carol's contest.. I just love the theme you chose.. Wishing you the best for her contest with this yummy write, especially love how you started it :) *hugs*

Painted Hunter

July 18, 2012 at 11:22 AM

Mmmmm...melon lips. This one is soooo tasty!

Dinda Minardi

July 18, 2012 at 10:03 AM

woowww, this is amazing, nette!!! loved it! :)

Russell Sivey

July 17, 2012 at 11:16 AM

I just love this amazing write! You can write about anything Nette! Which is very awesome in its own right! This is a truly spectacular poem! I am so glad I got to read this write today, it was very pleasing to read! Great Work!!