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Watermelon Mouths

~tangy flavor drips
     on watermelon’s skin pink…
         brushing kneaded mouths

flesh of summer pulp
     pops with zing  like frothy cream…
          to thrill nibbling bites

 breaths in rhapsody
      trailing juicy midnight love…
            when melon lips meet



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Carol Brown’s Lips Contest
by nette onclaud

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2012 11:08:00 AM

Thank you for your support of my contest and congratulations on your well deserved win Nette. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2012 5:02:00 PM

((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara

David Williams

Date: 7/25/2012 3:52:00 AM

Nette, super congrats on your win, excellent write..a lovely set of senryu's...David

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/24/2012 7:28:00 PM

Tasty, watermelon on a hot day. Congratulations.

Joy Wellington

Date: 7/24/2012 7:19:00 PM

Congrats Nette on your third place win. One love. Joy Wells

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/24/2012 5:50:00 PM

congrats Nette luv on a super fantastic write and win.. how creative ..both title and content my friend..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/24/2012 5:05:00 PM

Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love

Jane Kostman

Date: 7/24/2012 12:31:00 PM

so cute i like this poem jane xoxo

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/20/2012 8:34:00 PM

I love watermelon,,,,, reminds me of eating them in our garden as a kid after we picked them with our mom,,,, love fruit,,,,,, was just eating blueberries,,,,a mango this morning ;}

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/19/2012 12:38:00 PM

Nice, refreshing poem for summer! Good luck in the contest. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2012 5:34:00 PM

hey , I had boysenberry mouth and you had melon. I love them both!!! Food makes everything better, and lips too. YUM!!! awesome.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/18/2012 11:42:00 AM

Nette, what a fab write for Carol's contest.. I just love the theme you chose.. Wishing you the best for her contest with this yummy write, especially love how you started it :) *hugs*

Painted Hunter

Date: 7/18/2012 11:22:00 AM

Mmmmm...melon lips. This one is soooo tasty!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/18/2012 10:03:00 AM

woowww, this is amazing, nette!!! loved it! :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/17/2012 11:16:00 AM

I just love this amazing write! You can write about anything Nette! Which is very awesome in its own right! This is a truly spectacular poem! I am so glad I got to read this write today, it was very pleasing to read! Great Work!!