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lily pad floats 'pon shallow pond, roots deep.... spot before disemboguement baby fish touch roots, nibble enjoy safety, shade shad shows silver sides waterlily sends a flower up to praise sun.... dragonfly above
5-5-7 7-5-5 7-5-7 2nd of new form Not an ordinary Haiku Written: 12-16-22

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Date: 12/21/2022 7:21:00 PM
Lovely images, vivid and beautifully interrelated. All the Best in the contest, dear Sara...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/22/2022 4:59:00 AM
Valsa, Thanks for the visit and encouragement. Sara
Date: 12/16/2022 7:59:00 AM
Splendid poems.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/16/2022 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. Your encouragement is uplifting. Sara
Date: 12/16/2022 6:23:00 AM
Great set of haikus, Sara. You conveyed such a stunning nature scene, with skillfully penned diction.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/16/2022 1:02:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

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