Waterlily
lily pad floats 'pon
shallow pond, roots deep....
spot before disemboguement
baby fish touch roots, nibble
enjoy safety, shade
shad shows silver sides
waterlily sends
a flower up to praise sun....
dragonfly above
5-5-7
7-5-5
7-5-7
2nd of new form
Not an ordinary Haiku
Written: 12-16-22
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