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Watering the Garden of Dreams

Our garden of dreams
     is a fertile one-
with roots buried deep
     in heart, soul, and mind.
They're nurtured beneath
     our hopeful sun rays-
but oft wither on 
     dry paths to our goal.

They must be kept watered-
     moistened with life
by streams of commitment
     that bolster growth;
then splashed with the flow
     of fervor makes lush
those dreams that mature-
     fulfilling our vows.


April 26, 2020

~2nd Place~
Contest: Brian Select 1
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 06/02/2020

~HM~
Contest: Pick-A-Title, Vol 16 - Free Verse 2
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

Title Used: #5 - "Watering The Garden Of Dreams"
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Ibeh Avatar
May 3, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Nicely done, Sandra:-) This is a perfect poem to frame and hang in the living room! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Ashley Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 8:10 PM
Your poem is filled with metaphoric beauty and life's wisdom, Sandra. Your last four lines make for an exquisite finale to an exceptional piece. Quite lovely, as always, dear poetess. Best wishes for a win and best wishes for you.. ~Susan
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