Watering a Wilted Flower

She was a wreck;
alcohol, drugs, and loneliness
were her company.
Men loved her body,
but avoided her soul like a plague.
“You will never be loved,”
she heard. 
Scornful whispers crawled all around her.
One man loved her so dearly,
that he was ready to see and touch
the ugly scars of her life – he was ready
to be scorned as she was.
“You won’t love her for long,”
he heard.
A woman struggling not to drown
into nothingness is all he saw in her eyes…



(This piece was published in Literature Today (Vol. 4)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 1:08 AM
:) SURE
Kimathi Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 3:37 AM
;-)
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 1:00 AM
Hi Teddy, thank you, for the reply
Kimathi Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 1:06 AM
Welcome, anytime ;-)
A. Sharma Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:15 PM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Teddy.
Kimathi Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Gentry Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Congratulations on your win! Touching, painful, sad...
Kimathi Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 1:04 AM
Sorry Susan. It seems my reply jumped, lol. Thanks Susan, for your applause!!! *^_^*
Kimathi Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 1:01 AM
Hi Vladislav. Thank you so much for your applause!!! *^_^*
Raven Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Hi Teddy, dropping by with Congratulations on your placement in Skat's contest but i see i have to congratulate you on having the piece published. Congratulations my friend....Vlad
Kimathi Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Hi Vladislav. Thank you so much for your visit and applause!!! *^_^*
A   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Teddy, congrats on your wonderful love poem. Thanks for Supporting a Skat Contest, while she is away. Love LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 12:59 AM
Welcome Linda. Anytime. Thank you for your applause!! *^_^*
A  Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Teddy, thank you for the support. :) SK
Kimathi Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 12:58 AM
Welcome Skat! *^_^* <3
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