Watering a Wilted Flower

She was a wreck;
alcohol, drugs, and loneliness
were her company.
Men loved her body,
but avoided her soul like a plague.
“You will never be loved,”
she heard. 
Scornful whispers crawled all around her.
One man loved her so dearly,
that he was ready to see and touch
the ugly scars of her life – he was ready
to be scorned as she was.
“You won’t love her for long,”
he heard.
A woman struggling not to drown
into nothingness is all he saw in her eyes…



(This piece was published in Literature Today (Vol. 4)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/18/2016 1:08:00 AM
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Date: 2/18/2016 3:37:00 AM
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Date: 2/18/2016 1:00:00 AM
Hi Teddy, thank you, for the reply
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Date: 2/18/2016 1:06:00 AM
Welcome, anytime ;-)
Date: 2/17/2016 11:15:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Teddy.
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Date: 2/18/2016 1:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Date: 2/17/2016 8:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Touching, painful, sad...
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Date: 2/18/2016 1:04:00 AM
Sorry Susan. It seems my reply jumped, lol. Thanks Susan, for your applause!!! *^_^*
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Date: 2/18/2016 1:01:00 AM
Hi Vladislav. Thank you so much for your applause!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/17/2016 1:49:00 PM
Hi Teddy, dropping by with Congratulations on your placement in Skat's contest but i see i have to congratulate you on having the piece published. Congratulations my friend....Vlad
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Date: 2/18/2016 1:05:00 AM
Hi Vladislav. Thank you so much for your visit and applause!!! *^_^*
Date: 2/17/2016 10:29:00 AM
Teddy, congrats on your wonderful love poem. Thanks for Supporting a Skat Contest, while she is away. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:59:00 AM
Welcome Linda. Anytime. Thank you for your applause!! *^_^*
Date: 2/17/2016 9:04:00 AM
Teddy, thank you for the support. :) SK
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:58:00 AM
Welcome Skat! *^_^* <3
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