Len Gasun Poet Verse

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Waterfalls

dazzling whites
they cascade on green heights
spectacular curtains that inspire
as I  go down with  flow of life’s musical lyre
I’ll sing the lullabies of dreams which never tire
refreshing the plaintive minds and souls
listen to summer calls
waterfalls

June 14, 2014  11.15pm

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Form of Poem:  “Trois-Par-Huit  Poem”  



First Place
Contest: A poem you've not entered in a contest#10
Judged:8/1/2014
Sponsor: Poet PD

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Daver Austin September 8, 2014 at 11:45 AM Clouds and Festivals. Do you know the Debussy? Your fine piece reminds me of it. daver Len Gasun October 6, 2014 at 8:46 AM Oh, i don't have any idea about it my dear friend Daver. I will search to gain some knowledge about it. Very belated thanks for taking your precious time to read and leave a wonderful comment on this poem of mine. Big hugs! love lots, Leonora

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 3:51 PM Hello Sweet sis, how are you... :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. Missing you my BFF...... always ~LINDA~ Len Gasun July 24, 2014 at 10:59 AM Hi, very lovely sis of mine! You're much welcome. Thank you so much as well for your kind visit. I miss you too my loving sis. Sending my loveliest hugs, smiles and kisses right back to u. Mind me w/ God's mercy, I'm just ok despite d pressure & load of work. How about u?Hope everything is fine now. You're always in my thoughts & prayers. I'm always here for u ok. I love u much evrdearest sis. Tcare & God bless!

Faye Gibson July 11, 2014 at 6:34 PM Very nice, Leonora. Congratulations on your #1. Len Gasun July 20, 2014 at 10:19 AM Belated many thanks my dear friend Faye! More blessings! Hugs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 11, 2014 at 5:00 AM Very beautifully described whites cascade on greens Leonora! The form is really awesome ,, adds to the beauty! Congrats on top place win! Len Gasun July 20, 2014 at 10:18 AM Belated many thanks my dear friend Dr. Upma! More blessings! Hugs!

Robert Lindley July 10, 2014 at 6:05 PM Huge congrats on your great win!!!!!!! "dazzling whites they cascade on green heights spectacular curtains that inspire" INDEED!!!!!!!!!!!! Len Gasun July 20, 2014 at 10:17 AM Belated many thanks my dear friend Robert! More blessings! Hugs!

Paul Callus July 10, 2014 at 6:04 PM A 7 rating for this one and congrats for a well deserved top win in the contest. The two middle lines made it for me! Happy to be sharing the same podium with you and Elly:)) // paul Len Gasun July 20, 2014 at 10:15 AM Belated thank you so much my very dear friend Paul! Many congrats as well. Likewise my dear friend. More blessings! Hugs!

Tim Smith July 10, 2014 at 2:00 PM Love the rush of the waterfall...So exhilarating....congrats Tim Len Gasun July 20, 2014 at 10:13 AM Belated many thanks my dear friend Tim! More blessings! Hugs!

Robert Nehls July 10, 2014 at 1:09 PM Congrats on the win. Leonora. Waterfalls in summer, so refreshing. Wonderful poem that I greatly enjoyed.... Robert. Len Gasun July 20, 2014 at 10:12 AM Belated many thanks my dear friend Robert! More blessings! Hugs!

Casarah Nance July 10, 2014 at 1:06 PM Fabulous, great imagery, peaceful and relaxing, Yahoo on your contest win with this :) Len Gasun July 20, 2014 at 10:11 AM Belated many thanks my dear friend Casarah! More blessings! Hugs!

Arlene Smith July 10, 2014 at 12:37 PM Congrats on a beautiful win, Leonora!.. Hugs.. Arlene Len Gasun July 20, 2014 at 10:10 AM Belated thanks a lot my dear friend Arlene! More blessings! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2014 at 12:28 PM - Yes, I remember this beautiful poem dear Leonora - congratulations .... well deserved! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun July 12, 2014 at 10:13 PM Thank you so much my dear friend Anne Lise! Big hugs!

Poet Destroyer A July 10, 2014 at 11:14 AM Hi SIS, Yes I miss you, I haven't gotten through my ordeal. However, here you find my on the soup, enjoying your first place win... SIS, enjoy my newest blog ""A True Friend"" when and if you have the time... COngratulations... forever your bff..Linda Len Gasun July 12, 2014 at 10:12 PM Sending you all my loving hugs my dearest sis and bff. I'm always here.

Poet Destroyer A July 2, 2014 at 10:41 PM Hello SIS, Miss you, thank you for stopping by, and greeting my poems, with smiles, and your open heart. I'm still struggling at the moment. However, I will make time and text you in a bit.. Sending love and hugs... forever and ever your BFF Linda Len Gasun July 4, 2014 at 12:14 PM Happy 4th of July to you and your family. God bless! Len Gasun July 4, 2014 at 12:07 PM Hi my dearest sis! you're much welcome. Thank u so much as well for sweet poem, your love, support your precious time etc. I appreciate them all so much. Wish, i'm with u sometimes. Sending u my love and many hugs too my dearest sis-BFF. lovem4everLeonora

Nette Onclaud July 2, 2014 at 6:06 PM lors, incredible sway of images!.. how are you; been a while... happy to be part of your destiny contest.. any new piece coming up?... take care over there in bkk.. the rainy season is upon us here in P.I...huggs Len Gasun July 4, 2014 at 12:18 PM Thank u so much for stopping by my dearest friend Nette. Thanks again for joining my contest. take care as well. Happy Fil-Am Day to u & to all! God bless! Many hugs!

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2014 at 1:40 AM Hi, Leonora, just stopping by to say thanks for the comment and I hope to see you with a new posted poem soon! Luv, Andrea Len Gasun July 4, 2014 at 12:27 PM Hi, my very dear friend Andrea. Thank u so much as well. Happy 4th day of July! Many hugs!

Elaine George July 2, 2014 at 12:24 AM A beautiful ;Trois-Par-Huit', rendering,Leonora. Your friend in poetry, Elaine Len Gasun July 4, 2014 at 12:28 PM Thank u so much my very dear friend Elaine. Sending many hugs!

Aiyah Torres July 1, 2014 at 3:31 PM ooowww-some!!! I really admire your poem, my dear Leo!! ..You always surprised us with a real different words... deep meanings and fantastic lines!! ..WoW!! ..:O) Thank you for commenting on my poem... I hope you get well soon.. Be healthy and stay sweet as honey.. lovelots, Aiyah :)) Len Gasun July 4, 2014 at 12:31 PM :))Thank u so much for that wonderful comment my dear friend Aiyah. I'm quite flattered but tyssm again:)) This poem is a product of my curiosity;)). Thanks a lot again.

Andrea Dietrich June 30, 2014 at 3:04 PM came by to thank you for my win in your contest. I LOVED that contest!!! Do you have a new poem coming here soon? Len Gasun July 1, 2014 at 6:09 AM you're much welcome my dear friend Andrea. your poem deserved it. thank you so much as well. i'll try my best to write a poem soon/post an old poem if i can. tysm. more blessings! hugs!

Connie Marcum Wong June 26, 2014 at 11:30 PM Oh, I love this wonderful poem. You have this form shining in the limelight Leonora! I think this one has got to go into my fav's. I love the easy yet brilliant way you write! Len Gasun June 30, 2014 at 11:46 AM My honor for your loving visit, for faving my poem and the very encouraging comment my dear friend Connie. Thank u, thank u so much. I'm sorry for coming only now. Hugs back to u my dear friend. love lots, Leonora

Ravi Sathasivam June 24, 2014 at 8:08 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed . Tfs Len Gasun June 30, 2014 at 11:48 AM Thank u so much my dear friend Ravi for the very encouraging comments.love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Bukang Liwayway June 23, 2014 at 8:33 AM wow!! lovely piece from my one of my Idol ;) so refreshing beautiful....have a blessed week my dear friend...cheers!! Len Gasun June 30, 2014 at 11:55 AM Thank u so much my dear friend Maria for the very encouraging comments. I'm quite flattered 'cuz for me, I've still so much things to learn. I'm so grateful you took some of your precious time to read my humble experimental poem. Tytysm. More blessings! Big hugs! love lots, Leonora

Mohan Chutani June 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM Very nice write, Leonora. Trying to catch up with your poems. Mohan Len Gasun June 30, 2014 at 11:57 AM Thank you, thank u so much my dear friend Mohan for your precious time reading my shorty poem. I appreciate it so much.

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2014 at 6:05 PM I am finally seeing your note to me. I sure wish you had gotten into my contest on time. You did such a great job with this one, sweetie. Len Gasun June 30, 2014 at 12:04 PM Thank u so much but it's fine with me my very dear friend Andrea. At least you've visited this experimental poem of mine and your comments mean a lot. TYTYSM. love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Pandita Sietesantos June 22, 2014 at 12:16 PM Just simply divine! A beautiful and magical write! Reminding me of a visit to Niagara Falls! Thank you for sharing this gem, my friend! Enjoy the rest of your weekend! Len Gasun June 30, 2014 at 12:07 PM Wow! How I wish I can also visit Niagara Falls someday my dear friend Pandita. Tytysm for the very inspiring/encouragingcomment. love lots & big hugs, Leonora

Ravindra K Kapoor June 21, 2014 at 5:01 AM Let me get lost in such a lovely scenic beauty, where life is rolling with the water stream of a wonderful fall all along the green valley while creating the sound of Music. This is definitely a great beauty you have painted here my friend. Hats off for such creative works in words as well as on the canvas of your painting. Great lines to make them a fav. Poem as it has the 3D effects. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra K Kapoor Len Gasun June 22, 2014 at 7:38 AM Thank you so much for that very wonderful and poetic comments my very dear friend Ravindra. Your lovely comments will certainly encourage and spur me to paint more. I was trying to post my painting on the about poem nook but it took time. Perhaps, i'l try again. This painting has inspired me in writing this poem . TYTYSM, & my honor for liking this poem of mine. More blessings to u and best wishes as well my dear friend. Big hugs.

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