Waterfalls

splashing their laughter
         falls rush over resting rocks -
   the woods whisper 'hush'

May 1, 2020 

(In my membership area it says "NA" but I see lots of congrats underneath
it, so I do not know what that is about! I even got a trophy it looks like!)

naturehaiku

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 9/24/2021 5:22:00 AM

Beautiful

JCB Brul

Date: 5/27/2020 4:44:00 AM

This is a captivating Haiku! I became speechless!! Hash!! Lovely! To my faves!!!!

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/9/2020 10:22:00 AM

I think you've mastered this form Andrea, congratulations...

Jack Horne

Date: 5/7/2020 2:28:00 PM

i can see why this was a big winner - i can almost hear this

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/5/2020 8:50:00 PM

You got the gold dude - ok, not really a human shaped statue but I've wanted to say that ever since Robin Williams did when he won an oscar. You make brilliant look simple and that's what your gold, not a dude, statue represents. Remarkable brevity, my dear friend. Love, CayCay

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/4/2020 9:08:00 AM

Congrats, I can see why this is a great choice for the podium.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/4/2020 6:24:00 AM

You deserved the podium cup!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/4/2020 3:30:00 AM

Wow. What an engaging haiku with lots of personification. 'splashing their laughter' is such an auditory line ... love it. (And it looks like it place in the contest too ... congrats!) I always thought you were one of the better haiku poets on the site ... not many can pull it off.