Waterfalls

Under lush green trees,
Comes the splash’s kiss I seize
Puffing eight degrees
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 2:32 PM
oh you used the word splashing too! I just love that middle line! Lush is a wonderrful word too.
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