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Waterfall Trickles

waterfall trickles thawing ice releases drops.. moss 'pon rocks turns green The frozen giant towers Great mighty melting water waterfall's moisture seeps as spring awakes nature... deer sups deep from stream rain from mountain top turns to mist as it comes down.. rainbow in my eyes The bridal veil waterfall Seen through Azaleas' blossoms The morning day scents Come blooming into my life Melting waterfall Russell Sivey & Sara Kendrick This is a collaboration between Sara and myself. She did lines 1,3,5 I did lines 2,4,6

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Donna Jones

Date: 8/12/2013 3:57:00 PM

Beautiful....:-)

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/2/2013 2:41:00 PM

Wonderful collaboration between all of you wonderful refreshing words! Laura :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/2/2013 1:27:00 AM

you guys complement each other well. I especially liked the last stanzas that each of you did.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/2/2013 12:48:00 AM

wow, you and Sara did a great job, my friend

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/1/2013 10:08:00 AM

russell, i told sara how immensely dleightful this pairing is.... you both combined graceful poetic energy through this mesmerizing write... salute!... lovely..:) huggs

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/1/2013 9:47:00 AM

Wonderful collaboration between the two of you........the two of you meld beautifully!

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/31/2013 10:13:00 PM

How wonderful! I enjoy collabs from 2 strong poets. This was absolutely beautiful! You 2 did wonderful!