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Waterfall Time Forgot

Oak Savanna steps Ages will never sallow Your glorious path

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/5/2009 7:07:00 AM
AMAZING--AWESOME WORK--CHARMA
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Date: 9/3/2009 6:45:00 PM
Nor sallow the beauty of it in your verse. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/3/2009 4:31:00 AM
Jim, I wish you the best in Raul's contest. Excellent. Thank you for your kind comments my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2009 11:39:00 PM
Best wishes with this one Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 9/2/2009 6:48:00 PM
Great Haiku Mr. Goff ! You've painted a wonderful picture here,..all the best on your entry ! james
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:30:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest James...Raul
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:03:00 PM
Interesting Haiku. Sara
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:00:00 PM
nice ands to the point
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:00:00 PM
Magnificent James!! Love this!!! :) Carrie
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