Waterfall Serenade

majestic mountains
waterfall violins play
velvet string music


Cynthia
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 31, 2012 at 12:08 AM
Nice idea for a haiku poem. Just two things: the second word of your title is correctly spelled "serenade". Also, you have six syllables in your last line which is one too many.
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August 31, 2012 at 3:18 AM
Robert, Once again I must thank you for the "alert"...."Haste does indeed make waste!" I appreciate your help. So glad you clicked in. Cynthia
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