Waterfall of Love

The love that flows in You
cascades out and all about;
I try to capture that love
with eager, open arms --
every day at your waterfall.
The rush of your love is felt
like pristine water against rock;
each moment in loving You
polishes the roughness of me.
I forever desire to be drenched...
at your waterfall of love.



For "Your Verse Again" contest sponsored by Brian Strand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 11:39 PM
Congrats, George! This is such a romantic read. "Each moment in loving you polishes the roughness of me"...It doesn't get more romantic than that. Blessings, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 3:09 PM
Congrats on your win in Brian's contest..Enjoyed reading this one today..Great to have this kind of person in your life..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 2:13 PM
dear me, how lovely and tender is this verse, george.. flows like a river..best of luck!..:) huggs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 4:40 AM
Very Nice George I like the sound of a "waterfall of love" congratulations and thank you for the comments xx
Quigley Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 10:02 PM
Congratulations on your win George. Nicely done
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Romantick and beautiful poem Georg, love the titel:"Waterfall of love" - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 2:19 PM
ps.good luck in the contest !!!Anne-Lise
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February 7, 2012 at 2:13 PM
Fine write George.... top shelf poetry my friend..... always Michael
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