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Waterfall of Love

The love that flows in You cascades out and all about; I try to capture that love with eager, open arms -- every day at your waterfall. The rush of your love is felt like pristine water against rock; each moment in loving You polishes the roughness of me. I forever desire to be drenched... at your waterfall of love. For "Your Verse Again" contest sponsored by Brian Strand.

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Date: 2/9/2012 11:39:00 PM
Congrats, George! This is such a romantic read. "Each moment in loving you polishes the roughness of me"...It doesn't get more romantic than that. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/8/2012 3:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Brian's contest..Enjoyed reading this one today..Great to have this kind of person in your life..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 2/8/2012 2:13:00 PM
dear me, how lovely and tender is this verse, george.. flows like a river..best of luck!..:) huggs
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Date: 2/8/2012 4:40:00 AM
Very Nice George I like the sound of a "waterfall of love" congratulations and thank you for the comments xx
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win George. Nicely done
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Date: 2/7/2012 2:19:00 PM
Romantick and beautiful poem Georg, love the titel:"Waterfall of love" - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/7/2012 2:19:00 PM
ps.good luck in the contest !!!Anne-Lise
Date: 2/7/2012 2:13:00 PM
Fine write George.... top shelf poetry my friend..... always Michael
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