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Waterfall

cascading sheets of silver water spill incessantly into the lake thundering beauty before our eyes beckons us to bathe in radiance lost in froth we find ourselves engulfed by nature’s pulse, shimmering delight lost in love my heart is pounding too falling with the water - into you Written Oct. 30, 2014 for the SOME FORM OF CRYSTALLINE Contest of nette onclaud

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Date: 7/9/2017 8:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this one :) Hope you had fun on your vacation, did you see Elvis :). My Fireflies is second column 28th from bottom :)
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Date: 2/24/2016 3:49:00 AM
If ever I can identify a good poem....Well written Andrea
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Date: 8/30/2015 1:23:00 PM
I don't think it gets much better than this, particularly in terms of a concluding line. Exquisite, to put it conservatively. It soars above a 7. You're a remarkably gifted poet, Andrea. Congrats--and hugs.
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Date: 3/25/2015 4:10:00 AM
Nicely penned and deserving of your win. Julia, xx
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Date: 1/23/2015 2:54:00 AM
Showers of applause to your WIN Andrea!! ^_^
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Date: 1/18/2015 4:26:00 AM
ahhha, this won again... it's really gooood, andie.. big congrats.. woohoo!.. huggs
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Date: 1/18/2015 12:56:00 AM
Truly romantic,congrats on the win Andrea...huggs
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Date: 1/17/2015 11:55:00 PM
Fabulous imagery Andrea, your winning write is exquisite and beautiful!
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Date: 1/17/2015 3:59:00 PM
congratulations Andrea on this fine win,who's working outside the box now? interesting format
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Date: 1/17/2015 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your win with this beautifully romantic write!!!!
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Date: 1/17/2015 1:00:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats again Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/17/2015 12:07:00 PM
I love this one Andrea. I am sure I fav'd it. Congrats on your deserving win!
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:05:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 1/2/2015 9:10:00 PM
for me...it doesn`t get better than this....
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Date: 11/29/2014 10:33:00 PM
Very nicely described. I hear the roar of the cascading waters as i read this poem. Excellent!! :) john.
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Date: 11/17/2014 10:32:00 PM
nicely worded Andrea :) How are you theses days. xoxo
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Date: 11/10/2014 9:41:00 AM
Coming back to read once again one of my favourite poems of yours my dearest friend Andrea and to congratulate you heartily for your great win on this marvelous piece! I would like also to congratulate you as well with the others. I'll try to come back and read them soon.Thank you so much for sharing!Many hugs! love lots, Leonora--soupmail pls. ty
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Date: 11/9/2014 7:38:00 AM
Beautiful words tumbling down. I once drove behind a waterfall on the highway, it was amazing.
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Date: 11/8/2014 2:47:00 PM
back again...sounds even better on a second read!! had visualized it at the top of the winners' list, and so it is...congratulations!! // paul
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Date: 11/8/2014 9:27:00 AM
I can feel the froth on my face, Andrea, and hear the thunder of the falls! Thanks for sharing your talent with us. And your surprise ending is magnificent.
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Date: 11/8/2014 8:23:00 AM
Every stanza speaks volume but the third stanza wins my heart;the beauty of nature well painted, a great Job here; congrats Andrea.
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Date: 11/8/2014 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Very beautifully written.
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:20:00 AM
Beautiful piece, congrats on the win
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Date: 11/7/2014 9:46:00 PM
what a remarkable play of words, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/7/2014 1:50:00 AM
andie, perfect word choice, pacing and eloquent imagery... yes, you gave me goosebumps!..thank you for being part of my contest and big congrats!
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